cat clan

[ringtail]

i made my own cat clan! ;D
here it is:
lightclan
leader:Mosstar(shecat)
deputy:Reedclaw(tom)
medincecat:Strippedleaf(shecat)
warroirs:
Bramblefoot(tom)
Sandnose(tom)
Soottail(shecat-mossstar was very sick when she named her)
Apprentices:
Icepaw(shecat)
Ringpaw(shecat)
Scarletpaw (tom)
Treepaw(shecat)
Spottedpaw(shecat)
queens:
Moonflower(shecat)
Yellowflower(shecat)
Cloudfrost(shecat)
elders:
Rippedwisker(tom)
Mattedfur(tom)
kits:
Hollykit(shecat)
Frostkit(tom)
Wildkit(shecat again very sick)
moonkit(just like her mom moonflower)
and moonkit's brother:skykit
so tell me about my clan if there needs to be changes or add things

[Kestrel]

'Mossstar' would probably look better if you combined 'moss' and 'star'. 'Mosstar.'

And Clan names don't have spaced. Light clan would be 'Lightclan' or 'LightClan.'

I like the name Strippedleaf<3

[Ripplemist]

I see an Icepaw. xD
I like the name Cloudfrost. Frost is such a pretty name ending.

[ringtail]

what bad about icepaw? it is me on the warroirs web site. do you have an icepaw? kestrel i will change mossstar to mosstar ok? thanks most of these names are mine own and some of them are names of my family and friends

[Ripplemist]

Nah, I don't. :> Just that someone else does.

[ringtail]

oh ok and there is a new addishion look for the green cat! ;D

[ringtail]

also i'm writing a story and so far these are two parts that i worte in my head.


moonflower looked around in the field.snowkit was gone!
"snowkit! where are you!" then a big truck went rolling by and in the back was snowkit meowing and clawing at the back window.
"snowkit!" moonflower ran after snowkit as fast as she could go then the truck speed up leaving moonflower in a smog cloud,but she kept running.
after a while the truck was not in her veiw.
"noo!" she shouted to the sky. then she coplasped.dead.
"wha.."started sandnose. he had heard the cry of pure angiush and ran after the sound. he came to the field and saw moonflower laying there. he ran to her and saw that she was dead.
"no moonflower" he picked up a paw and saw that the pad was torn and still bleeding. from behind him he saw wildkit.
"mom?" he started"mom! get up what happened!" he looked at his dead mom laying there not even peaceful death.

and


moonkkit tumbled after brother he was running. A big storm had come and the rain had just started. they weren't even in lightclan yet.
"skykit wait up i got something in my pad!" she yelled at him he slowed down and turned around. then a big flash of lighing lit up the sky and hit a branch.
"skykit look out!" but it was too late. the branch came down on top of skykit and he was killed instantly.
"skykit?" moonkit walked over to skykit's motionless body. the storm sunally stoped and was fading. moonkit ran to skykit.
"skykit." she sobbed "no this was our first mission and i was trying to protect you. but i failed" moonkit looked for someone but there was none just her and skykit.she grabed his paw and pulled him out. he was covered in blood and dirt. she ran home with skykit on her back.
"this is my fault." she siad to her self."if i had just stopped and got out the thorn he would still be alive." she ran into camp and was confronted by the clan right away.
"what happened?"
"where is yellowflower you where bringing her back"
"why is skykit dead?"
then mosstar came and they all back away.tears filled mosstar's eyes. her two kits came back safe but skykit was dead.
"tell me what happened." she siad holding back her tears.
"it's my fault i told him to help me get a thorn and he turned around then a tree brach broke off and" she couldn't bear it. moonkit broke into tears. carring skykit she ran to the meddince den. stripedleaf was at moonstump. she ran to the very back put skykit down, berried her face in his fur and cried.
"moonkit! what are you doing in my den?" stripedleaf had come back.
"i'm sorry skykit he's.." she paused to stop herslef form crying "dead."
"oh i'm so sorry i shouldn't have told you to go."
"help me i feel so alone now and i can't fix what happed!"
"oh it's ok" stripedleaf placed his tail over moonkit's sholders.
"you still have me and your brother."
"no! he's gone!"
"no his spirt will follow you now just let everyone share tounges with him for the last time then he can go to starclan in peace"
"o-o-ok"
stripedleaf carried skykit out to the center of the clan. so skykit was off to be berried so he can go to starclan. and that night monnkit slept outside the nursery. she felt warm and happy and mosstar looked out at her and saw the fanit outline of skykit sleeping right next to her.

ok i know very sad but they are all i could think of. and don't worry yellowflower comes back, moonflower's kits get fed by yellowflower and moonkit gets over skykit's death and the clan is soon normal again.
*theese both happen at different times*

[ringtail]

urg i made another one using blackfire's first post.
ooc:greenpelt in a random cat he is not real(he also talks oldish)
read blackfire's post in rouge meadow and then read this

greenpelt had hread a cat yelling and went to see what it was.there was the preetiest she-cat he had ever seen. but why was she taring up the grass like it had hurt her?"hello kitty what's you doing to that
'um grass?"he told her
in front of her was a big broad shoulder tom
"um no reason" she said getting up right away. he looked very interresed in her it was scary.
"can you-don't you have a clan where you can go?" she got up to his level. his eyes were the bautifulest amber-brown.
"uh no i'm just here to see why your taring up there grass"he repiled staring back in to her deep jadegreen eyes. but the pain was too much. he wanted to shout to her yes! i loved you when i hread you scream,but, he bit his touge making her leave him .aloner just like before.