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Post by tigerstar092 on Feb 16, 2008 20:23:16 GMT -5
Name:Fallen Leaves Age:12 moons Gender: Tom Fur Color: Dark ginger splocthes on snow-white fur Eye Color:Dark emerald green Personality: Funny(in a strange way), synacil and ill-tempered History:Used to live in The Tribe of Tall Oaks. Was a sharpclaw(warrior)and took the name of Fallen Leaves in name of the dark ginger marks on his fur.(They all look like fallen leaves.)
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Post by Bristle + War on Feb 16, 2008 20:30:22 GMT -5
You don't need to make a new post for every time we tell you to change things. But this one's better; I don't think it's a big deal that you put fur colour and eye colour as separate things...
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Post by tigerstar092 on Feb 16, 2008 20:33:44 GMT -5
ooc: Can delete the other posts by me? ;D
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Post by Bristle + War on Feb 16, 2008 20:38:48 GMT -5
Yeah. But this also shouldn't be in the 'Revised Character Descriptions' either, as it's just fixing the old one, not 'revising' it.
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Post by tigerstar092 on Feb 16, 2008 20:40:31 GMT -5
ooc: Okay! Thanks for telling me! Can you move my new description to the right place for me? ;DAnd can I start posting now?
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