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[Wander]

Name: Nightclaw
Age: 23 moons
Gender: She-cat
Personality:

Nightclaw is a very interesting cat, She is sometimes hot-headed and fierce and sometimes rude and stubborn but the only time she is well exactly nice is when she is around her mate, oh ya I almost forgot she is very very protective of her mate Stormtail.*watch yourself*

Description:

Nightclaw is a silky White and a hint of a light chocolate brown; she is very fast Her delicate Brown paws cut right through the soft earth when she runs, On her face its half brown and half white *kind of like ying and yang* and her eyes are the key to her getting mates to whatever she wants but she is never happy she feels like she is bound to the tom who wins a fight over her so she’s always sad but hides that she’s sad with a poker face

History:

She was a stubborn kit. she was also falling in love but then her mate went off to fight the intruders and he got killed and she has been looking for the killer ever since and will not stop until she kills his mater herself. She has tried not to fall in love again but it might take over her and she might lose to the love.

Other:

Death is close yet so far away,wating for you to slip and cach you then drag you down so wach your step

[Goldenblaze]

_{I would suggest that you run your description through a Word Document or something, and check your spelling and punctuation. It's very hard to read.}

[Wander]

sorry! i fixed it