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Post by starrain on Dec 10, 2008 15:56:22 GMT -5
Name: Rainpelt Age: 26 moons Gender: Tom Personality: Rainpelt is very very over protective of this mate *lightpaw*and her kits, he wants to be leader of Stelthclan. him+leader= FIGHT and it wont be short it will be last one brething wins!!! but otherwise he gets along with everyone else but one leader he dose like is Stelthclans.he loves hunting and helping kits climb and play.sometimes he can be hot temperd becuse he's stresd out and sometimes only lissens to his freind shadowrain
Description: Rainpelt is a kinda blue-ish dark black cat and on his pelt he has a brown raindrop shape,his eyes are a mix of red,blue and green his right front paw is a brown like the raindrop on his pelt. History: Rainpelt met Lightpaw in skyclan he became freinds after she had her kit Spiritwind and he was defending her from the leader becuse the leader didnt aprove of them sharing toungs becuse lightpaw was not born in the clan and they were thrown out of the clan so with a newborn Rainpelt went out to ask Stelthclan if they were welcome and they were so Rainpelt and Lightpaw started like eathother more and more unitl the were mates and when Lightpaw told Rainpelt she was expecting Rainpelt whent into shock and whent on a hunting trip and came back exited for his kits to come Other: ok the description wasnt that grate but give me cretit ya know 
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Post by starrain on Dec 14, 2008 19:34:04 GMT -5
:3
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Post by Pripyat on Dec 14, 2008 20:56:13 GMT -5
You ought to run your bios through a spellchecker. Most, if not all, computers have some program like Microsoft Word, and they come with spell checkers. ^^
Anyway, the thing about your character wanting to fight the StealthClan leader won't work. Rainpelt can want to fight Sunsetfire all he wants, but I hope you know that his plan to take over wouldn't work. Even if he did kill the leader, there's no way he'd get control of the Clan--a) there's a deputy who would step in instead, and b) Sunsetfire, the leader of StealthClan, actually created StealthClan. If Rainpelt killed him, StealthClan would literally tear him apart.
Not trying to be snarky or anythiny--I'm just making sure you're informed.
Edit: Looked over the bio again, and the history is a little confusing to me. Did you accidentally put the sentences in the right order?
Also, cats can't have eyes that are red AND blue AND green. We try to keep BotW at least mostly realistic; blue and green is fine, and so is bluegreen, and even red eyes is okay, but a combonation of the three is not. Cats generally do not have kalaidescope eyes.
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Post by starrain on Dec 15, 2008 20:34:42 GMT -5
Oky alright easy,thats is just what he wants to do when he is felling evil
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Post by starrain on Dec 15, 2008 20:38:18 GMT -5
Alright i fixd it and insted of makeing a big long thing about it can you just PM me about it meany thanks for reading, Starrain |
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