Post by Turtlekit on Aug 10, 2007 18:45:46 GMT -5
A young tortishel kit white a white chest and forepaws, she is quite mischevious and likes to swim...alot, I'm serious, she can catch a fish while swimming, she's that good! Even though she is so skilled, she can't live on her own, she was born with an evil father who killed her mother just after she didn't have her mother's milk, she grew up bent to his will, she was basicly a slave, I'd bet anything she'd make a very good and obedient warrior for DuskClan!
At the bounry of DuskClan, a young kit sits there, crouched in a bush, waiting for something to happen, but time went on and on, and nothing happened except the stir of prey and the rustle of leaves being pushed by the wind, then a new noise caugth her attention, a small group of 3 or 4 cats was approuching! Maybe, just maybe, she could join them in life, for them to bend her to their will, never again would she listen to orders from her father, she wants with all her life to live peacefully with different cats, ones who won't abuse her immedient obediance, "Help!" she wailed as the cats came into a clearing infront of the bush, she was so happy that her fther hadn't come to find her, that evil red cat, Ragewhisker, I beleive was his name, was the last cat on earth she wanted to see.
--I fixed it, no longer a tabby, but a plain red cat named Ragewhisker--
At the bounry of DuskClan, a young kit sits there, crouched in a bush, waiting for something to happen, but time went on and on, and nothing happened except the stir of prey and the rustle of leaves being pushed by the wind, then a new noise caugth her attention, a small group of 3 or 4 cats was approuching! Maybe, just maybe, she could join them in life, for them to bend her to their will, never again would she listen to orders from her father, she wants with all her life to live peacefully with different cats, ones who won't abuse her immedient obediance, "Help!" she wailed as the cats came into a clearing infront of the bush, she was so happy that her fther hadn't come to find her, that evil red cat, Ragewhisker, I beleive was his name, was the last cat on earth she wanted to see.
--I fixed it, no longer a tabby, but a plain red cat named Ragewhisker--
