The cat rumba

[rumba24532]

A small cat walks though the forset it a full grown adult. it looks for more cats and a nice tree to sleep in .slowly the cat move forward sniffing to see who was here then .he saw a tree he could sleep in. but he needed food he whened off hunting he saw a small dog,and a human sleeping. he creeped up queitly with out a nosie. he leaped for the dog's neck and got it the small dog.It paniced it woke up the human. the human was to late tough the the cat had it but the cat was still in danger he had to something so he use his claw to hit the human and the human fell. he carry the Small dog over to the tree But he had some unexpect guest.

"Who are you" he roared

[Kestrel]

[ Eh ^^' Saying he had an unexpected guest is powerplaying, actually. And unless it was a very small dog, no cat could carry it. ...And no small cat can knock out a human, especally with a single blow. Realistic RP, sorry. ]

[Amberstar]

<sub>[Feh, I'll see what I can do. It's really hard to read. ; Sorry, i'm really picky with spelling and grammatical errors. But Kest is right, that was powerplaying...

Amberstar hissed as the cat attacked. She'd been watching the human for some time now, trying to discover it's habits to get rid of it, and to call upon some warriors to help her. Then the cat had escaped with the dogs, running almost into her.

She raised a brow, gold eyes burning in fury. "You dare question what I may be doing on my own land, cat? It is you who is trespassing!" She snapped, tail flicking irritably. "It is unwise to attack a two-leg without some form of tactic," She growled coldly.

"State your name and business here, or find your home elsewhere. Ignore these orders, I can summon a few cats to rid of you in a heartbeat," She replied in a calmer tone, eyes still burning into the young cat's pelt.</sub>

[rumba24532]

"I am rumba the mix. im trying to find somwhere sleep thank you."Rumba's fur rose "back off!"

[Amberstar]

<sub>She let out a furious snarl. "Back off!! Back off? You are talking to a leader of Treeclan, kittypet!! Respect your elders, especially when you're tresspassing on my territory! Perhaps it would do better to chase you off!!" She bared her teeth at the tom, ears flattening. She was no longer playing, especially since she was being ordered around by a tom who knew her not at all! If he wanted a fight...?

He was about to be badly outnumbered.

"Leave, or listen to my command and state your name and alliance! I will not tolerate insolense from those not of my clan," She growled, obviously irritable now.

[Sorry, but it's not suggested that you mess with her. ^^; Dood, she'll like.. Call the wrath of Starclan on you!! XDDDD Don't mind me...]</sub>

[rumba24532]

MY NAME IS RUMBA PANTHER CAT! AM A WONDER!

[Astralpaw]

Astralpaw walks slowly through the forest, watching where she puts her paws. She stops when she hears two cats; a tom and a she-cat. Astralpaw looks on to the two cats and sits down listening to the conversation. She shakes her head, Doesn’t he know that he needs to respect his elders? This is not going well, for him anyways.

[Amberstar]

<sub>Amberstar bristled, standing abruptly as she glared at the small black tom, tail flicking over the ground. "I see what you are, and to be frank it does not matter what you are as long as you are on my boundaries." She flicked her tail irritably. "Respect me while you remain on my borders. I will have to get rid of that-" She flicked her tail at the human laying on the ground not far from her "-with the help of my warriors. And you will help me, whether you like it or not. Keep the dog for all I care, but you're the one who left the human there. It's more of a burden laying there like a dead prey than alive and walking," She sniffed coldly, turning to suddenly see a deep grey cat.

She blinked, friendliness flourishing into her eyes. Courtesy, at least, to those who have shown no disrespect. "Welcome, what be your name, kit?" She asked softly, sniffing the air, thick with cat scents.</sub>

[Astralpaw]

Astralpaw walks out of the shadow and gives a slight head bow to Amberstar, "Hello, I am Astralpaw."

Now that she was out of the shadows she had a better look of the events that had taken place around the two-leg. Astralpaw looks at the two-legger and sees its stomach rising and falling. It’s alive. She looks back to Amberstar, “I know that I am trespassing, but I have no place to go, so I have been wandering… for a while.” She looks down at her paws.

[rumba24532]

Rumba wonders who this cat is." who are you?"

[Astralpaw]

Astralpaw looks over at him and takes a deep breath, "I'm Astralpaw." She looks back to Amberstar, I wonder what will happen next. Will she chase me out of her territory? It would not be the first time a cat has done that to me. Astralpaw sighs and just waits for what will happen.

[rumba24532]

"muh?My name is rumba and worry am not letting her chase you off!"stands in front of AstralPaw.

[darkwhisk]

ooc - Rumba, you're in two places at once...your cat can't be in two Clans. You're either in TreeClan or RisingClan. Choose one, and you can make a different cat for the other if you want.

[rumba24532]

occ - this was before I whened to the rising clan!

[Amberstar]

_{"Why would I chase her off? She growled coldly, sending a piercing gold gaze in the direction of Rumba. "She actually has some form of courtesy towards her elders." She looked down at Astralpaw. "Welcome to Treeclan, Astralpaw. I am Amberstar. Can I offer you a home with Treeclan?"}

[darkwhisk]

ooc - You seem to be replying to both at once.

[rumba24532]

occ- I did this one before the other!

Rumba moved out of the way."sorry,astralpaw."he sat down and wacthed.

[Astralpaw]

I look at Rumba as he jumps in front of me, " I never said-" I look to Amberstar, "Do you really mean it? Can I really have a home?" She replies still getting over the shock."Yes, thank you," she replies happily.

[rumba24532]

"see ya later astralpaw!"

He runs off.

[Bane]

ooc| Sorry to intervene, but I must really point out some things.

1. The rules clearly state that unless you are a clan leader accepting members, you aren't allowed to have the same character in two places at once.
2. Please use past tense as opposed to present. That would make "Astralpaw walks" into "Astralpaw walked"
3. Please, use correct grammar. I'm fine with short posts, but even so, run you're posts through a spell check, and think before you post so you don't say things like "worry am not letting her chase you off" which if you read, makes no sense. Sure, after having to think what you're saying we understand, but we shouldn't have to think in order to understand it. Grammar also includes using capital letters, punctuation, and just generally everything you learn at school.
4. Please use common sense. I assume you know how large a cat is, and even compared to a small dog a cat is tiny, particularly a wild one. Besides the fact that a cat would never want to eat a dog, it would never be able to kill it, let alone carry it, and let alone be able to make a human fall over. We are a realistic roleplay, which means anything that doesn't happen in the real world, won't happen here (apart from the anthropormorphing the cats so they can speak).

Sorry to be all angry admin on your ass, but those are the general rules. I hope you've read the other rules also, if not you should definitely do so now unless you want to see more of this side of me =P[/size]